Editing Mal and Hiika's emails (section)

==Mal's first message== 
hello!

my name is malachi ortega and i pilot beta unit 00. we have fought some nacaals and an angel too! the first nacaal was easy and only two of us had to work at beating it, but then the second one was harder and we kept shooting it and it wouldn't die so chris had to shoot some lightning that came out of it back at the thing. then we fought an angel, it was like a big whale. it nearly bit my feet off! 

my hobbies include reading and being with my friends. i am a nerd in some ways, i like to read about the angels and stuff, but i am also quite social. today is a bit sad for me though, asuka from tokyo is leaving, she has been here for quite a long time but her eva was fixed. they stopped here to pick up the core from the second nacaal which it dropped without breaking because the rest of it was made of jelly and it landed on the beach.

for tips for a new pilot: i am quite new so i can't help much! however i would say that trying too hard is a bad thing. i find piloting evas much better if you work with the eva at a constant pace with it, rather than trying to ride it like a bike or something.

i look forward to your response too!

mal