Editing My Immortal (section)

==Chapter 1==
AN: Hugz an gaussez (get it, coz Im necron) 2 my gf (ew not in that way) raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. U rok!

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Hi my name is Ekhbeni Drakh'nezh Dimmensha Rhavenn Stormlord and I have a long ebony black Gauss power cord (that's how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my Gauss blaster and icy blue eyes that look like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Taldeer (AN: if u don't know who she is get the hell out of here!). I'm not related to Imotekh the Stormlord but I wish I was because he’s a major fucking hottie. I'm a necron but my necrodermis feels almost still alive. I have pale white metal-flesh. I'm also an Immortal, and I fight for an Overlord called Anrakyr where I'm a Pyrrhian Eternal (I'm 60,170,000). I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell) and wear mostly black. I love Haat Topekh and buy all my adornments from there. For example today I was wearing a black shoulderguard with matching lace around it and black leather thigh augments, pink networked shinguards, and black combat foot casings. I was wearing a black lower mandible casing, white face covering, black eyeliner and red optic filters. I was walking outside the Monolith. It was snowing and raining so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of oldcrons stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them.

"Hey Ekhbeni!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was...Illuminor Szeras!

"What's up Szeras?" I asked.

"Nothing." he said shyly.

But then, I heard my friends call and I had to go away.

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AN: IS it good? PLZ tell me hugz n gaussez!