Editing DOOM: Repercussions of Evil (section)

===DOOM: repercussions of evil (revised)===

He stood in trance. Lights flickered, the air was dense with a strong scent of blood and gore. Demons where there. He was too scared to go on, even if he refused to admit it. All stood still for a while; The communicator on his helmet reproduced the message   ''Captain Stalvern? Why are you Staling in there? Get it?''

"''not funny Col... You should have listened to me, I said we shoud have brought...''" -he gets interrupted-

"'' FIRST OF ALL, you are only Captain of this operation, I DECIDE WHAT'S FUNNY OR NOT. SECOND OF ALL, I only listen to my personal advisor, you have no right to give me any advice CAPTAIN!''"

"''yeah look where that got you, inside a facility in mars stuck under debris waiting for me to rescue you; Oh and also your advisor got killed!''"

"''HEY, I DIDN'T KNOW THAT ROCKET LAUNCHER WAS THAT POWERFUL''"

"''dumass...''"

John turns out his communicator, re-fueled with anger that his superior inspired.

"''gotta fight like hell''"

John grabbed his plasma rifle, little ammo, probably couldn't kill an imp. The logo of the UAC split on the opening door, revealing quite the landscape. Before him stood a mancubus, 3 hell knights and a cyberdemon. The hell knights where about to charge as the cyber-demon roared and fired a rocket wich ended up hitting the hell knights. John was about to laugh, interrupted by the floor collapsing. He and the demons fell for what seemed like hours. John took advantage of the clean shot and counted his fires. one, mancubus down, two, cyber-demon stunned, three, debris turned to dust. As he hit the floor, the dusted debris was not enough to brace the impact. his body on the ground with the plasma rifle far away and a cyber-demon with revenge in his eyes, John lets out a muffled ''Rip & Tear'' as he grabs two pieces of concrete and throws one directly into the rocket-launcher destroying it, and the other at the demons horns, breaking one of them off. now back on his feet, he charges at the cyber-demon, horn in hand and stabs the demon's heart, screaming many times "I must kill the demons!" 

The cyber-demon let out a final cry "''BROTHER''" and ceased struggling. John was shocked. "''Why would a demon say that?''"  He fell in trance once again.
The voice of his superior echoed through the hallway behind him. He turned, almost happy that he finally found his superior. He says "''jason! you're fine!''"; The happiness quickly ended as He saw the Colonel with a rocket-launcher in hand, pointing straight at him with fear in his eyes. he yelled with a trembly voice in a language John didn't understand but seemed familiar

john looked at his body covered in blood, felt a weird taste in his mouth, tainted. he felt awful, like a hangover without the fun of prior drinks. After the hell knights exploded, some of their blood fell into his mouth. the transformation happened mid air, making it seem like time had slowed down. he only survived the fall because he was tainted.

Falling into this realization, John couldn't bare his life anymore and ran through the hallways, somehow evading the rocket from Colonel Jason. All of his life started collapsing. Eventually, it clicked. all his memories vanished, most emotions disappeared. At the moment he only felt... hunger. John, or what He is now, rushes back smelling flesh. He attacks a marine that was crippeled on the floor, finishing his prey with a hit on the head with a horn. He does not know where that horn came from, but it is his weapon now. 
Suddently he feels something, he starts heading towards an arena, as if something commanded him. Now with a group of demons that looked just like him. He is now a Zombie, marching towards a monster in green, in full awareness of his fate. As he charged to his death he started a chant with his group
"''RIP & TEAR, RIP & TEAR''". -The end