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	"Thank you." she said soft,and warm to Aeric.		"Thank you." she said soft,and warm to Aeric.
	He didn't protest, he wouldn't deny the fact he enjoyed her attempts each night, he still needed to make her respect boundaries. He didn't protest as she reached to help him remove his own armor. His mind was clouding but he tried to remain calm.		He didn't protest, he wouldn't deny the fact he enjoyed her attempts each night, he still needed to make her respect boundaries. He didn't protest as she reached to help him remove his own armor. His mind was clouding but he tried to remain calm.
	" Try all you like, it ~~wont~~ happen tonight."		" Try all you like, it won't happen tonight."
	"I don't care, I'll get it eventually, tonight I want to be comfortable." Her voice full of confidence.		"I don't care, I'll get it eventually, tonight I want to be comfortable." Her voice full of confidence.
	The noticeable lack of resistance almost made her want to press on. He gently pushed her off as he began to remove his armor. She responded by removing her clothes and laying on Aeric's bed, working her way under the covered and to Aeric's greatest shock, she did something he did not expect. She fell asleep.		The noticeable lack of resistance almost made her want to press on. He gently pushed her off as he began to remove his armor. She responded by removing her clothes and laying on Aeric's bed, working her way under the covered and to Aeric's greatest shock, she did something he did not expect. She fell asleep.

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	" You were right sir, Harnessing emotions can be powerful." She was staring at Faline.		" You were right sir, Harnessing emotions can be powerful." She was staring at Faline.

	The crowd didn't didn't disperse, but their weapons lowered, keeping a close watch on the demon. Aeric became furious, he could not be seen as defeated, not in front of everyone, especially Faline. Defiantly not to Dalia as well. He had to think fast to regain control of the situation, as Faline moved closer to extend a helping hand. He quickly wrapped his arms around her and tossed himself on top, a hasty decision. As he rested on top Dalia let out a playful, yet seductive groan as her coal black hair fanned out around her head, glistening slightly in the sunlight. And in a moment all to familiar his heart began to race. He looked into her beautiful amber eyes, and tried to muster himself in the most dignified way he could as he picked himself up. She laid on her back reaching an arm out for someone to help her. The group was admiring more than assisting. Finally a helping hand came from the young Paladin Voren. The young man almost lost in the ~~sucubi~~'s seductive curves. She knew how much she captivated the poor boy, but she knew when to use some restraint, besides she had her eyes on another. With her display no one would dispute her claim, no one but the steel clad elf, and that's just what she planned.		The crowd didn't didn't disperse, but their weapons lowered, keeping a close watch on the demon. Aeric became furious, he could not be seen as defeated, not in front of everyone, especially Faline. Defiantly not to Dalia as well. He had to think fast to regain control of the situation, as Faline moved closer to extend a helping hand. He quickly wrapped his arms around her and tossed himself on top, a hasty decision. As he rested on top Dalia let out a playful, yet seductive groan as her coal black hair fanned out around her head, glistening slightly in the sunlight. And in a moment all to familiar his heart began to race. He looked into her beautiful amber eyes, and tried to muster himself in the most dignified way he could as he picked himself up. She laid on her back reaching an arm out for someone to help her. The group was admiring more than assisting. Finally a helping hand came from the young Paladin Voren. The young man almost lost in the succubi's seductive curves. She knew how much she captivated the poor boy, but she knew when to use some restraint, besides she had her eyes on another. With her display no one would dispute her claim, no one but the steel clad elf, and that's just what she planned.

	The bewildered crowd slowly dispersed one by one, all that would be are the soon to be travelers. Almost in a triumphant display the succubus dusted herself off with a rather satisfied look about her. She knew she would be punished sooner or later by her increasingly furious Adept, but for now she relished her moment of power over Aeric. He felt naked with his emotions able to be seen so easily, Aeric reached for his helmet fumbling with it in his haste.		The bewildered crowd slowly dispersed one by one, all that would be are the soon to be travelers. Almost in a triumphant display the succubus dusted herself off with a rather satisfied look about her. She knew she would be punished sooner or later by her increasingly furious Adept, but for now she relished her moment of power over Aeric. He felt naked with his emotions able to be seen so easily, Aeric reached for his helmet fumbling with it in his haste.
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	She slowly moved to the gear still confused how she was going to pack the gear. fumbling over most of the equipment. She did her best trying to pack the equipment into the bags and store things properly. Aeric walked up to her grabbed the bags and emptied them.		She slowly moved to the gear still confused how she was going to pack the gear. fumbling over most of the equipment. She did her best trying to pack the equipment into the bags and store things properly. Aeric walked up to her grabbed the bags and emptied them.
	"Too slow, run a lap around the stable."		"Too slow, run a lap around the stable."
	He motivated the demon to begin to run, keeping pace, and striking her every time she slowed. She would finish her lap and the orders began again for her to pack the gear. As soon as the time limit drew near the Paladin began barking the time left ~~untill~~ he made her run again, each time she failed he pushed her more, making her work harder doing more to exhaust her. They continued for an hour, but Dalia finally accomplished the Goal set by her harsh master.		He motivated the demon to begin to run, keeping pace, and striking her every time she slowed. She would finish her lap and the orders began again for her to pack the gear. As soon as the time limit drew near the Paladin began barking the time left until he made her run again, each time she failed he pushed her more, making her work harder doing more to exhaust her. They continued for an hour, but Dalia finally accomplished the Goal set by her harsh master.
	She always managed to keep with the pace he set, albeit sometimes he felt we has being too cruel.		She always managed to keep with the pace he set, albeit sometimes he felt we has being too cruel.
	"That took too long, now you'll have to move faster for the next part of your chores." She almost fell to the ground in horror that she'd still have to do more.		"That took too long, now you'll have to move faster for the next part of your chores." She almost fell to the ground in horror that she'd still have to do more.
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	"We get to leave tomorrow?"		"We get to leave tomorrow?"
	"Yes."		"Yes."
	" ~~Thats~~ good."		"That's good."
	She closed her eyes and went back to sleep. That was the end of the night for the two, Aeric would stay away much longer watching the demon sleep peacefully, his nerves kept him up. Not of Dalia, but the prospect of freedom so close. How the journey will go, as well as the anticipation of marching towards a battle once again. He would glance over at the demon and feel peace. He closed his eyes and slowly fell asleep.		She closed her eyes and went back to sleep. That was the end of the night for the two, Aeric would stay away much longer watching the demon sleep peacefully, his nerves kept him up. Not of Dalia, but the prospect of freedom so close. How the journey will go, as well as the anticipation of marching towards a battle once again. He would glance over at the demon and feel peace. He closed his eyes and slowly fell asleep.
	The pair slept comfortably in each others embrace. Aeric wasn't plagued with his usual nightmares. His mind was more focused and centered. The morning would come soon enough. And with the growing sunlight in the room Aeric slowly woke to Dalia still laying on top of him.		The pair slept comfortably in each others embrace. Aeric wasn't plagued with his usual nightmares. His mind was more focused and centered. The morning would come soon enough. And with the growing sunlight in the room Aeric slowly woke to Dalia still laying on top of him.

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	The rest he had was the most peaceful in weeks. Strangely no nightmares would haunt him, be it from the peace of mind he got from his only connection to his old companion, or the sheer exhaustion from the night prior. Aeric sleep well, and awoke to Faline resting on him. He wasn't too fond of elves, he didn't harbor any feelings of hate, he just felt uneasy, but not with Faline. He was more fascinated with her, and that sleepless sleep elves fall into. She was fast asleep but yet aware. The paladin worked careful not to disturb his partner as he tried to get up. Her eyes opened.		The rest he had was the most peaceful in weeks. Strangely no nightmares would haunt him, be it from the peace of mind he got from his only connection to his old companion, or the sheer exhaustion from the night prior. Aeric sleep well, and awoke to Faline resting on him. He wasn't too fond of elves, he didn't harbor any feelings of hate, he just felt uneasy, but not with Faline. He was more fascinated with her, and that sleepless sleep elves fall into. She was fast asleep but yet aware. The paladin worked careful not to disturb his partner as he tried to get up. Her eyes opened.

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	The rest he had was the most peaceful in weeks. Strangely no nightmares would haunt him, be it from the peace of mind he got from his only connection to his old companion, or the sheer exhaustion from the night prior. Aeric sleep well, and awoke to Faline resting on him. He wasn't too fond of elves, he didn't harbor any feelings of hate, he just felt uneasy, but not with Faline. He was more fascinated with her, and that sleepless sleep elves fall into. She was fast asleep but yet aware. The paladin worked careful not to disturb his partner as he tried to get up. Her eyes opened.		The rest he had was the most peaceful in weeks. Strangely no nightmares would haunt him, be it from the peace of mind he got from his only connection to his old companion, or the sheer exhaustion from the night prior. Aeric sleep well, and awoke to Faline resting on him. He wasn't too fond of elves, he didn't harbor any feelings of hate, he just felt uneasy, but not with Faline. He was more fascinated with her, and that sleepless sleep elves fall into. She was fast asleep but yet aware. The paladin worked careful not to disturb his partner as he tried to get up. Her eyes opened.
	" Good morning." she said while stretching a bit.
	Aeric rolled his eyes. He said nothing		<br>" Good morning." she said while stretching a bit.
	" I forgot how fun you can be." She rolled over her hand searching beneath the sheets. Aeric let out a surprised grunt as she found her mark.		<br>Aeric rolled his eyes. He said nothing
	" Nothing like a good thrashing to remember old times, eh?"		<br>" I forgot how fun you can be." She rolled over her hand searching beneath the sheets. Aeric let out a surprised grunt as she found her mark.
	" I guess." Aeric's voice monotone, he felt reality returning, but he fought it desperately.		<br>" Nothing like a good thrashing to remember old times, eh?"
	" I'm just worried what'll happen when she finds out."		<br>" I guess." Aeric's voice monotone, he felt reality returning, but he fought it desperately.
	"IF she finds out... IF" Her words blissfully optimistic.		<br>" I'm just worried what'll happen when she finds out."
			<br>"IF she finds out... IF" Her words blissfully optimistic.

	He removed himself from the bed, Faline glaring hungrily at her lover as he dressed. She tossed the sheets off her in an attempt to lure Aeric back to bed. He paid no heed. It wasn't as if he hadn't enjoyed himself, or her form, the reality began crashing back. Dalia. He wasn't privy to knowledge if succubi are notoriously jealous, but he was going to find out.		He removed himself from the bed, Faline glaring hungrily at her lover as he dressed. She tossed the sheets off her in an attempt to lure Aeric back to bed. He paid no heed. It wasn't as if he hadn't enjoyed himself, or her form, the reality began crashing back. Dalia. He wasn't privy to knowledge if succubi are notoriously jealous, but he was going to find out.
	~~" Oh come back to bed, let me take your troubles away again." she shot a wicked smile at him.~~
	~~He continued to dress, much to her protest. She didn't bother to dress instead she went to stand by the paladin.~~
	~~" I know you just wanted to come here to clear your mind and reminisce, but fretting about that demon is pointless."~~
	~~" I fear I am making the same mistake over and over." He said in a pained sigh.~~
	~~"Aeric." her hand caressed his cheek. " I'm sure your mind was clear from your troubles for the night."~~
	~~"It was..."~~
	~~" Then concentrate on that, be in the moment. and most importantly, concentrate on this." Her hand bringing his to her chest." Their eyes met again.~~
	~~Many hours would pass. An impatient demon waited at her door frame, like a lost dog awaiting her owners return. Soon she heard footsteps approaching.~~

			<br>" Oh come back to bed, let me take your troubles away again." she shot a wicked smile at him.
			He continued to dress, much to her protest. She didn't bother to dress instead she went to stand by the paladin.
			<br>" I know you just wanted to come here to clear your mind and reminisce, but fretting about that demon is pointless."
			<br>" I fear I am making the same mistake over and over." He said in a pained sigh.
			<br>"Aeric." her hand caressed his cheek. " I'm sure your mind was clear from your troubles for the night."
			<br>"It was..."
			<br>" Then concentrate on that, be in the moment. and most importantly, concentrate on this." Her hand bringing his to her chest."

			Their eyes met again.
			Many hours would pass. An impatient demon waited at her door frame, like a lost dog awaiting her owners return. Soon she heard footsteps approaching.

	She watched as an unusually happy Aeric walked down the corridor. It was painfully obvious to her what happened. She said nothing, she did nothing. Inside her emotions were tempestuous. She contemplated many things, out of anger out of vindication. All emotions she was familiar with, but that she knew would bring about her undoing. She stood there silent.		She watched as an unusually happy Aeric walked down the corridor. It was painfully obvious to her what happened. She said nothing, she did nothing. Inside her emotions were tempestuous. She contemplated many things, out of anger out of vindication. All emotions she was familiar with, but that she knew would bring about her undoing. She stood there silent.

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