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	“Well given your state, I'd imagine you'd fall dead pretty quick, and then who could you save?” Voren fell silent, not wanting to agree with her.		“Well given your state, I'd imagine you'd fall dead pretty quick, and then who could you save?” Voren fell silent, not wanting to agree with her.

	They found a bit of grass that was untouched from the sights and smells of the wounded. The smell was replaced with the pleasant aroma of cooking food. The Paladin couldn't help but notice the camp was quieting down. The solders had calmed themselves, either that or they drank themselves into a stupor, Voren thought to himself. Ariane sat down, she slowly leaned her head back grunting softly as her legs adjusted bending after a long day of standing. She could feel her feet begin to throb inside her boots. Voren's body didn't so much as sit, but crashed to the ground, clacking in his heavy plate. He panted for air not realizing how exhausted he had become.		They found a bit of grass that was untouched from the sights and smells of the wounded. The smell was replaced with the pleasant
			aroma of cooking food. The Paladin couldn't help but notice the camp was quieting down. The solders had calmed themselves, either that
			or they drank themselves into a stupor, Voren thought to himself. Ariane sat down, she slowly leaned her head back grunting softly as
			her legs adjusted bending after a long day of standing. She could feel her feet begin to throb inside her boots. Voren's body didn't so
			much as sit, but crashed to the ground, clacking in his heavy plate. He panted for air not realizing how exhausted he had become.

	Voren glanced up at the waning sky. The clouds separated into several nerrow strands as the sailed acrostic the evening sky. The Arec rested herself on her hands, leaning back as she glanced over the paladin's very ornate armor. She then reached up behind her head and pulled a string. Her red hair slowly began to fall down, though it was matted with blood and sweat. It formed into many thick strands. She scratched her head which turned into a satisfying stretch. She smiled at Voren.		Voren glanced up at the waning sky. The clouds separated into several nerrow strands as the sailed acrostic the evening sky. The Arec rested herself on her hands, leaning back as she glanced over the paladin's very ornate armor. She then reached up behind her head and pulled a string. Her red hair slowly began to fall down, though it was matted with blood and sweat. It formed into many thick strands. She scratched her head which turned into a satisfying stretch. She smiled at Voren.

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	“You ole Sunuva bitch! I knew you were too stubborn to die here. I mean look at you now. Paladin.” He leaned back and forth examining Aeric's armor. Glancing at the other in his group. “Well I guess you were the most religious in the cohort.”		“You ole Sunuva bitch! I knew you were too stubborn to die here. I mean look at you now. Paladin.” He leaned back and forth examining Aeric's armor. Glancing at the other in his group. “Well I guess you were the most religious in the cohort.”

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	Voren's eyes widened in disbelief from what he heard. Aeric was many things, but pious would have never been a word to describe the holy man. He took a different approach to enacting the gods will. Voren still exhaled a disgruntled grunt. The Centurion looked over the group, noticing the brunette strands of hair escaping Dalia's helmet.		Voren's eyes widened in disbelief from what he heard. Aeric was many things, but pious would have never been a word to describe the holy man. He took a different approach to enacting the gods will. Voren still exhaled a disgruntled grunt. The Centurion looked over the group, noticing the brunette strands of hair escaping Dalia's helmet.
	“Ah and Selena as well! How are you, you insufferable hag!” The man belted out another deep bellowing laugh.		<br>“Ah and Selena as well! How are you, you insufferable hag!” The man belted out another deep bellowing laugh.


	The Succubus froze momentarily. She placed her hands on the side of her face, popping the faceplate free. The mask revealed her face. The boisterous man fell silent. He gaze turned to Aeric. The Paladin's expression hadn't changed much, though he was awash with a torrent of emotions that only Dalia and himself could feel. The man turned back to the demon.		The Succubus froze momentarily. She placed her hands on the side of her face, popping the faceplate free. The mask revealed her face. The boisterous man fell silent. He gaze turned to Aeric. The Paladin's expression hadn't changed much, though he was awash with a torrent of emotions that only Dalia and himself could feel. The man turned back to the demon.
	“I apologize ma'am, I though you were someone else.” He turned to Aeric “ Where is sh-”		“I apologize ma'am, I though you were someone else.” He turned to Aeric “ Where is sh-”
	“She died.” Aerics words were curt and monotone.		<br>“She died.” Aerics words were curt and monotone.
	“I'm sorry.. I didn't know...”		<br>“I'm sorry.. I didn't know...”

	There was a moment of passing silence. Marred only by the clamor of the goings on in the camp. The man raised his head and looked at Aeric with a somewhat softer expression. He took a breath, remembering his duty.		There was a moment of passing silence. Marred only by the clamor of the goings on in the camp. The man raised his head and looked at Aeric with a somewhat softer expression. He took a breath, remembering his duty.

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	CHAPTER TWO		CHAPTER TWO

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