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1d4chan>Slipmcripfist at 04:54, 6 November 2022

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	''Intelligent beings struggle in every moment of their lives. Even in moments of apparent calm, there is always the struggle against one's own self.''		{{Topquote\|Intelligent beings struggle in every moment of their lives. Even in moments of apparent calm, there is always the struggle against one's own self.\|Uriel Salazar, ''Confessions''}}

	- Uriel Salazar, ''Confessions''

	'''Tollund Ötztal''' was the [[Primarchs (Hektor Heresy)\|Primarch]] of the [[Mastodontii]], the Eighth of the Emperor's [[Legiones Astartes (Hektor Heresy)\|Legiones Astartes]]. Although many knew him as a well-meaning soul conscious of the horrors of war, Ötztal's troubled mind would fall to Chaos and become a birthing ground for sadistic terror during the [[Hektor Heresy]].		'''Tollund Ötztal''' was the [[Primarchs (Hektor Heresy)\|Primarch]] of the [[Mastodontii]], the Eighth of the Emperor's [[Legiones Astartes (Hektor Heresy)\|Legiones Astartes]]. Although many knew him as a well-meaning soul conscious of the horrors of war, Ötztal's troubled mind would fall to Chaos and become a birthing ground for sadistic terror during the [[Hektor Heresy]].

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1d4chan>Lumey at 08:44, 16 September 2018

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	''~~There's a saying~~, ~~spread across~~ the ~~Galaxy and perhaps as old as mankind, that when it comes to committing terrible deeds, "It~~'s ~~always the quiet ones~~."		''Intelligent beings struggle in every moment of their lives. Even in moments of apparent calm, there is always the struggle against one's own self.''

	''~~Tollund Ötztal was very quiet.~~''		- Uriel Salazar, ''Confessions''

	~~(Gaspard Lumey, private correspondence)~~

	'''Tollund Ötztal''' was the [[Primarchs (Hektor Heresy)\|Primarch]] of the [[Mastodontii]], the Eighth of the Emperor's [[Legiones Astartes (Hektor Heresy)\|Legiones Astartes]]. Although many knew him as a well-meaning soul conscious of the horrors of war, Ötztal's troubled mind would fall to Chaos and become a birthing ground for sadistic terror during the [[Hektor Heresy]].		'''Tollund Ötztal''' was the [[Primarchs (Hektor Heresy)\|Primarch]] of the [[Mastodontii]], the Eighth of the Emperor's [[Legiones Astartes (Hektor Heresy)\|Legiones Astartes]]. Although many knew him as a well-meaning soul conscious of the horrors of war, Ötztal's troubled mind would fall to Chaos and become a birthing ground for sadistic terror during the [[Hektor Heresy]].

1d4chan>Lumey at 07:44, 16 September 2018

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			''There's a saying, spread across the Galaxy and perhaps as old as mankind, that when it comes to committing terrible deeds, "It's always the quiet ones."

			''Tollund Ötztal was very quiet.''

			(Gaspard Lumey, private correspondence)

	'''Tollund Ötztal''' was the [[Primarchs (Hektor Heresy)\|Primarch]] of the [[Mastodontii]], the Eighth of the Emperor's [[Legiones Astartes (Hektor Heresy)\|Legiones Astartes]]. Although many knew him as a well-meaning soul conscious of the horrors of war, Ötztal's troubled mind would fall to Chaos and become a birthing ground for sadistic terror during the [[Hektor Heresy]].		'''Tollund Ötztal''' was the [[Primarchs (Hektor Heresy)\|Primarch]] of the [[Mastodontii]], the Eighth of the Emperor's [[Legiones Astartes (Hektor Heresy)\|Legiones Astartes]]. Although many knew him as a well-meaning soul conscious of the horrors of war, Ötztal's troubled mind would fall to Chaos and become a birthing ground for sadistic terror during the [[Hektor Heresy]].

71.89.128.206: /* Attempt at Rules */

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Attempt at Rules

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	'''Sabaka's Might''': A large Axe, inscribed with Tisenjochi Writing Labelling the many tales of the Skyborn		'''Sabaka's Might''': A large Axe, inscribed with Tisenjochi Writing Labelling the many tales of the Skyborn
	S+~~1, AP2, Axe with Sunder~~, ~~and no unwieldy.~~		S+3 AP 2. Shred, Sky venom: every successfull to wound roll of 6 reduces targets toughness by 1d3

	'''Sabaka's Wisdom''': R:36", ~~S6, AP3~~, Assault 3~~. Primarch gun, moving on.~~		'''Sabaka's Wisdom''': R:36", S8 AP2, Assault 2 Every successfull penetrating hit automatically immobilizes vehicles on a 3+

	'''Silently Strong''': Fear at -~~1Ld~~, and gives Legiones Astartes: Mastadontii Stubborn.		'''Silently Strong''': Fear at -1d3Ld, and gives Legiones Astartes: Mastadontii Stubborn and Fear

	'''The Skyborn''': An inspiring Presence to the Regiments of Tisenjoch, Tollund Ötztal provides Re-rolls on morale to <Tisenjoch's IG Regiment>, as well as +~~1Ld~~.		'''The Skyborn''': An inspiring Presence to the Regiments of Tisenjoch, Tollund Ötztal provides Re-rolls on morale to <Tisenjoch's IG Regiment>, as well as +1d3Ld.
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1d4chan>Ukkesh: Finally added Rules for Ötztal, Be Proud of Me.

2017-06-12T09:07:02Z

Finally added Rules for Ötztal, Be Proud of Me.

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	"But you will pay my price of asking."		"But you will pay my price of asking."

			===Attempt at Rules===
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			! \|\| PTS \|\| WS \|\| BS \|\| S \|\| T \|\| W \|\| I \|\| A \|\| Ld \|\| Sv
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			\| '''Tollund Ötztal:''' \|\| 450 \|\| 7 \|\| 7 \|\| 7 \|\| 6 \|\| 6 \|\| 6 \|\| 5 \|\| 10 \|\| 2+/4++
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			Unit Type: Infantry(unique), Independant Character

			Wargear: Sabaka's Might, Endurance of Sabaka, Sabaka's Wisdom
			Special Rules: Adamantium Will, Silently Strong, Bulky, Eternal Warrior, Fear, Fearless, Fleet, Independent Character, The Skyborn, It Will Not Die, Master of the Legion

			'''Endurance of Sabaka''': Primarch armor Forged by the Highest Archmagi, just like pretty much every other primarch. Has a mammoth head Decoration on the chest, along with adamantium tusk sticking out the front.
			Endurance of Sabaka Confers a 2+ armor save and a 4+ invulnerable. Additionally any enemy model in BtB take D3 S4 AP4 hits.

			'''Sabaka's Might''': A large Axe, inscribed with Tisenjochi Writing Labelling the many tales of the Skyborn
			S+1, AP2, Axe with Sunder, and no unwieldy.

			'''Sabaka's Wisdom''': R:36", S6, AP3, Assault 3. Primarch gun, moving on.

			'''Silently Strong''': Fear at -1Ld, and gives Legiones Astartes: Mastadontii Stubborn.

			'''The Skyborn''': An inspiring Presence to the Regiments of Tisenjoch, Tollund Ötztal provides Re-rolls on morale to <Tisenjoch's IG Regiment>, as well as +1Ld.
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	'''Tollund Ötztal''' was the [[Primarchs (Hektor Heresy)\|Primarch]] of the [[Mastodontii]], the Eighth of the Emperor's [[Legiones Astartes (Hektor Heresy)\|Legiones Astartes]]. Although many knew him as a well-meaning soul conscious of the horrors of war, Ötztal's troubled mind would fall to Chaos and become a birthing ground for sadistic terror during the [[Hektor Heresy]].		'''Tollund Ötztal''' was the [[Primarchs (Hektor Heresy)\|Primarch]] of the [[Mastodontii]], the Eighth of the Emperor's [[Legiones Astartes (Hektor Heresy)\|Legiones Astartes]]. Although many knew him as a well-meaning soul conscious of the horrors of war, Ötztal's troubled mind would fall to Chaos and become a birthing ground for sadistic terror during the [[Hektor Heresy]].

1d4chan>Lumey: /* The Coming of the Emperor */

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The Coming of the Emperor

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	The first trial was of tracking. Ötztal set off from his fortress while Issitoq timed out an hour's passing. Then the stranger was told to pursue the Primarch. If he could not trail Ötztal, then he did not deserve to stand with him. The stranger set out at a run, only glancing at the soil ahead of him from time to time, but he followed Ötztal's path with the keen instinct of a hunting beast. It was not long before the two stood together and the second trial began. Ötztal passed a great bow to the stranger and explained that they would wait for the first sight of a deer, then loose one arrow. If the stranger could not equal Ötztal's shot, he did not deserve to speak to him. They waited in silence for a time, each warrior's keen senses appraising the other's stance and readiness. Then, in a flash, they caught a glimpse of movement, raised their bows and fired. The deer ran from them unharmed and Ötztal looked at the stranger in confusion, for he had never missed a shot while hunting before. In answer, the stranger only pointed to where Ötztal's bolt had fallen, struck from the sky by the stranger's shot. Smiling, Ötztal set down his bow and explained that the final test was wrestling. If the stranger could not prove equal man-to-man, then he would only have his audience as a supplicant and could make no demands. The two exchanged holds and strained their muscles against one another long into the cloudy night. But when the heavens parted and the light of the stars shone upon the stranger's face, Ötztal could no longer deny it. He was not testing his equal. His creator, the Sky-Father, was showing Ötztal the errors of his pride.		The first trial was of tracking. Ötztal set off from his fortress while Issitoq timed out an hour's passing. Then the stranger was told to pursue the Primarch. If he could not trail Ötztal, then he did not deserve to stand with him. The stranger set out at a run, only glancing at the soil ahead of him from time to time, but he followed Ötztal's path with the keen instinct of a hunting beast. It was not long before the two stood together and the second trial began. Ötztal passed a great bow to the stranger and explained that they would wait for the first sight of a deer, then loose one arrow. If the stranger could not equal Ötztal's shot, he did not deserve to speak to him. They waited in silence for a time, each warrior's keen senses appraising the other's stance and readiness. Then, in a flash, they caught a glimpse of movement, raised their bows and fired. The deer ran from them unharmed and Ötztal looked at the stranger in confusion, for he had never missed a shot while hunting before. In answer, the stranger only pointed to where Ötztal's bolt had fallen, struck from the sky by the stranger's shot. Smiling, Ötztal set down his bow and explained that the final test was wrestling. If the stranger could not prove equal man-to-man, then he would only have his audience as a supplicant and could make no demands. The two exchanged holds and strained their muscles against one another long into the cloudy night. But when the heavens parted and the light of the stars shone upon the stranger's face, Ötztal could no longer deny it. He was not testing his equal. His creator, the Sky-Father, was showing Ötztal the errors of his pride.

	After Ötztal recognised Him, the Emperor of Mankind spoke to his son and corrected the errors of superstition. He explained the truth of Ötztal's creation and the vastness of the [[Galaxy (Hektor Heresy)\|Galaxy]] beyond Tisenjoch. The Emperor also explained the role that Ötztal and his brother Primarchs were to play in the stars above. Although He was proud of Ötztal's achievements in subduing Tisenjoch, the Emperor was concerned over one matter. He noted that the Primarch took the name Tollund Ötztal and asked if this meant that he had accepted responsibility for the murder of Krodun and the events that had led to it. Ötztal nodded and knelt before his Father, prepared to receive punishment. Yet the Emperor's tone remained concerned, never flaring into anger. He asked what would stop Ötztal from embracing pride once more and rising against the growing Imperium of Mankind in pursuit of reward, rather than duty. Ötztal looked into his creator's eyes and replied that a guilty man ~~deserve~~ no reward. He swore that he only wished to atone for the blood shed on Tisenjoch's snows, to win absolution but not reward. If at the end of the Emperor's great task, He judged that Ötztal had not redeemed himself, the Primarch would gladly submit to any punishment.		After Ötztal recognised Him, the Emperor of Mankind spoke to his son and corrected the errors of superstition. He explained the truth of Ötztal's creation and the vastness of the [[Galaxy (Hektor Heresy)\|Galaxy]] beyond Tisenjoch. The Emperor also explained the role that Ötztal and his brother Primarchs were to play in the stars above. Although He was proud of Ötztal's achievements in subduing Tisenjoch, the Emperor was concerned over one matter. He noted that the Primarch took the name Tollund Ötztal and asked if this meant that he had accepted responsibility for the murder of Krodun and the events that had led to it. Ötztal nodded and knelt before his Father, prepared to receive punishment. Yet the Emperor's tone remained concerned, never flaring into anger. He asked what would stop Ötztal from embracing pride once more and rising against the growing Imperium of Mankind in pursuit of reward, rather than duty. Ötztal looked into his creator's eyes and replied that a guilty man deserves no reward. He swore that he only wished to atone for the blood shed on Tisenjoch's snows, to win absolution but not reward. If at the end of the Emperor's great task, He judged that Ötztal had not redeemed himself, the Primarch would gladly submit to any punishment.

	The Emperor nodded His agreement, but He did not smile.		The Emperor nodded His agreement, but He did not smile.