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	Back in her cell, Lofn began to panic. For most psykers, the warp was a place of terror – filled with daemons and horror. But Lofn wasn't just any psyker – she was half Eldar. While the warp wasn't calmer for her than anyone else, it brought the world around her into clear focus. She was no longer able to see into the future, or sense the world around her like an extension of herself. It was like suddenly being blind.		Back in her cell, Lofn began to panic. For most psykers, the warp was a place of terror – filled with daemons and horror. But Lofn wasn't just any psyker – she was half Eldar. While the warp wasn't calmer for her than anyone else, it brought the world around her into clear focus. She was no longer able to see into the future, or sense the world around her like an extension of herself. It was like suddenly being blind.

	What had happened to her mother? Where was her father? And why did she have a metal spike in her head that – she felt it safe to guess – robbed her of her powers? She still wasn't very old, certainly not by Eldar standards. Just turned ~~twelve~~, her powers were still new and uncertain to her. They were still very much a part of her – and she couldn't feel them. Her parents were gone, she was in a strange, dark place, her head felt like a spike had been driven into it, it seemed like a spike HAD been driven into it, and her psyker powers were gone. She started, very softly, to cry.		What had happened to her mother? Where was her father? And why did she have a metal spike in her head that – she felt it safe to guess – robbed her of her powers? She still wasn't very old, certainly not by Eldar standards. Just turned sixteen, her powers were still new and uncertain to her. They were still very much a part of her – and she couldn't feel them. Her parents were gone, she was in a strange, dark place, her head felt like a spike had been driven into it, it seemed like a spike HAD been driven into it, and her psyker powers were gone. She started, very softly, to cry.

	Suddenly, the door flew open and her fear was replaced by complete terror.		Suddenly, the door flew open and her fear was replaced by complete terror.
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	“I did care. And I still love you. I stood by you when no one else would after the incident on Uath Prime. But maybe I was mistaken. The Emperor cannot abide failure... and neither can I.” With that, she turned to walk away again, and Unity knew better than to say anything further.		“I did care. And I still love you. I stood by you when no one else would after the incident on Uath Prime. But maybe I was mistaken. The Emperor cannot abide failure... and neither can I.” With that, she turned to walk away again, and Unity knew better than to say anything further.

	As Sister Unity watched the Sister Superior walk away, she could still feel the presence in the cell next to her – where her own fate as a Sister of Battle rested entirely upon breaking the mind of a ~~twelve~~ year old girl.		As Sister Unity watched the Sister Superior walk away, she could still feel the presence in the cell next to her – where her own fate as a Sister of Battle rested entirely upon breaking the mind of a sixteen year old girl.

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	She stood up from her throne, crafted in the likeness of the golden throne on terra, and descended the steps to the two figures practically cringing below.		She stood up from her throne, crafted in the likeness of the golden throne on terra, and descended the steps to the two figures practically cringing below.

	“I gave you two a simple task,” she said. “Train a ~~twelve~~ year old girl. Break her spirit, cleanse her of her taint, and bring her to the service of the emperor. Not only have you failed, the girl has taken control of an entire class of initiates, and done major damage to the chapel – to say nothing of the damage she has done to a precious artifact from the Dark Age of Technology. Six veteran sisters have been injured, and we now have absolutely no idea where the girl is. Fortunately, I can still capture the girl and save the chapter from the disaster you have brought upon it. Unfortunately, I cannot save you. You are stripped of your status as sisters, and reduced to the ranks of the Repentia.”		“I gave you two a simple task,” she said. “Train a sixteen year old girl. Break her spirit, cleanse her of her taint, and bring her to the service of the emperor. Not only have you failed, the girl has taken control of an entire class of initiates, and done major damage to the chapel – to say nothing of the damage she has done to a precious artifact from the Dark Age of Technology. Six veteran sisters have been injured, and we now have absolutely no idea where the girl is. Fortunately, I can still capture the girl and save the chapter from the disaster you have brought upon it. Unfortunately, I cannot save you. You are stripped of your status as sisters, and reduced to the ranks of the Repentia.”

	At this, sister Unity wailed, and sister Serenity collapsed, fainting, only to be caught by the two sisters standing next to her.		At this, sister Unity wailed, and sister Serenity collapsed, fainting, only to be caught by the two sisters standing next to her.

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	Taking off her helmet, she smiled warmly and said, “Little girl, do you want to be pure?”		Taking off her helmet, she smiled warmly and said, “Little girl, do you want to be pure?”

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