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26 July 2014

• 05:0605:06, 26 July 2014 diff hist −1 Magical Realm Cyoa/Megalodonia →Dungeons: Changed "proto-runnic" to "proto-runic"
• 05:0305:03, 26 July 2014 diff hist 0 Magical Realm Cyoa/Megalodonia →Malice: Changed "breeches" to "breaches". Now they're rips instead of pants!
• 04:5904:59, 26 July 2014 diff hist 0 Magical Realm Cyoa/Megalodonia →The Entity: Changed "the than quiet world" to "the then quiet world"
• 04:5604:56, 26 July 2014 diff hist −7 Magical Realm Cyoa/Megalodonia →Leyline Networks: Changed "manipulating folding space-time" to "manipulating space-time" & "barrier encryption" to "barrier inscription"
• 01:2901:29, 26 July 2014 diff hist −2 Magical Realm Cyoa/Megalodonia →Burning Azure and Alabaster Deserts: Changed "gasses" to "gases"--the former is a present-tense verb.
• 00:0400:04, 26 July 2014 diff hist −2 Magical Realm Cyoa/Megalodonia →Boreal Carnivorous Forests and Tentacle Lakes: Changed "porphyric" to "pyrrhic". Not sure if that's the word you meant, but it fits there--I doubt you meant the caribou have difficulty producing heme and porphyrins.

25 July 2014

• 20:0920:09, 25 July 2014 diff hist +2 Magical Realm Cyoa/Megalodonia →Brief History and General Overview: Changed "its madness continues seeps into the land" to "its madness continues to seep into the land". First paragraph, last sentence.
• 09:1709:17, 25 July 2014 diff hist −1 Magical Realm Cyoa/Avalon →Relationship: Corrected expression "bring to bare" to "bring to bear"
• 09:1209:12, 25 July 2014 diff hist 0 Magical Realm Cyoa/Aventyr →Rehabilition and Penalty: Capitalized pronoun "i" in last sentence
• 09:0309:03, 25 July 2014 diff hist +1 Magical Realm Cyoa/Hivus →Changelings: Society: Mystic section, second paragraph, last sentence. "governed by a lose alliance of tribes" changed to "loose alliance"